Semester Portfolio

Dogun Hong - Ilki Hong

Website Link: http://hongdh171.wixsite.com/semesterportfolio16

1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? 

I like your Angry Letter writing the best. I liked this writing the best because it is a life experience that you can use in the future. Also, I like how you provided research with your claims, for example, a number of workers that the restaurant had. In the end, I like how you put the piece together overall.

1. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?

What I like about your portfolio is that the buttons make it easy to go to the next page. Although you do not have a button to go back. The portfolio is neat and is not confusing. What I want to see you improve the next time is to make a menu bar to more easily navigate through the website.

1. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?

I think that your voice writing trait was the most successful for you. The angry letter assignment is a good example of this. Also your coming of age essay. Showing your personal thoughts and emotions seems the most successful for you.

1. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?

I want you to improve on sentence fluency. Although you have a few sentence fluency, you need to have more variety. I mostly see medium or long sentences. You can use short sentences to give a different feel to your writing.